Rough Cut (Audience Feedback)

• The main criticism of our rough cut is that it didn't have a performance element, because of our genre I feel it is appropriate that we film a band performance so that our video is narrative and performance based.
• Another point that was made was that our storyline wasn't as clear as it could be, to approve this we will need to cut down some of the clips in our rough cut to make room for some of our other footage. This will ensure that our target audience understands the video.